Camp writing

Motivation:

Camp Experiences

Learning Objectives:

Level 3

• Show a developing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
• Select, form, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
• Use language features appropriately, showing a developing understanding of their effects.
• Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.

Level 4

• Show an increasing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
• Select, develop, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
• Use a range of language features appropriately, showing an increasing understanding of their effects.
• Organise texts. Using a range of appropriate structures.

Learning goals:

• To hook the reader in with an interesting beginning
• A variety of sentence starters
• A variety of sentence lengths
• Edit and rework
• Effective peer checking and feedback

Sailing the raft on our 4 tyres, I felt safe. While me and Finlay were the ONLY PEOPLE DOING WORK. Brooklyn and Louwtjie were the captains that did NOTHING! When me and Finlay were paddling my feet were dangling in the freezing cold water. Suddenly I was in the water when I popped back up I noticed our raft had broke. Some of our group were still on the raft because only part of the raft broke. So me and Finlay had to swim back to shore it was freezing!!